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Posted:  28 Apr 2007 01:43
I have to really hurry up and write my comic book because my comic book is based on the movie that I'm making which means I have to right the script for my movie and I'm filming my movie in the summer, right now I need everybody to really think hard about my character's name, here's a description and short story based on my comic book and movie to help you guys pick the name that best suits my character.

Here are my ideas for names for my comic book character.

1. KGB Agent

2. Soviet Hero

3. Russian Hero

4. Crypto

My comic book character is an alien who comes to Earth to destroy all humans, he lands in the Soviet Union with his flying saucer, he tries to take over the Soviet Union and Russia, he falls in love with a Soviet/Russian spy who works for the KGB, my comic book character then disguises himself to look like a KGB agent and then becomes the leader of the KGB, he and the Soviet/Russian spy woman team up to fight against the remaining Nazis, the Nazis find my comic book character's alien technology and then clone Adolf Hitler with my comic book character's cloning machine, after that conflict is over my comic book character becomes the leader of the Soviet Union and Russia.

My comic book character has to travel to every country in the world to stop the Nazis from taking over the world and every country he travels to he takes over it.

In the next issue my comic book character travels to Italy and fights the Nazis there, he then takes over Italy and makes Italy and the Soviet Union and Russia team up to fight their enemies together.

In the next issue my comic book character travels to the USA and fights the Nazis there, he then takes over the USA and makes the USA, the Soviet Union and Russia, and Italy team up to fight their enemies together.

What I have just stated are summaries of each issue in my comic book series, I will post the full story in every issue later, I'm still making up more stories for my next issues, more info on the next issues will be posted later.

FROM RUSSIA
WITH GUNS

In the time of World War 2, the Soviet Union and Russia must rely on 6 people to save them, and win World War 2: Crypto The Alien Soviet Soldier, Pox, Flaming Skull, Electric Ohm, Super Speedster, and Victory Man. Crypto The Alien Soviet Soldier is the leader of them.

Crypto The Alien Soviet Soldier’s superpowers are
Psychokinetic powers (Psychokinesis).

Flaming Skull's superpowers are Superhuman strength and durability,
Invulnerability to physical damage,
Ability to project regular and ethereal flame,
Ability to travel between interdimensional realms and along any surface,
Wields magical chain,
Rides flaming motorcycle.

Electric Ohm's superpowers are electricity and flight.

Super Speedster's superpowers are super speed and being able to vibrate himself through solid objects.

Victory Man's superpowers are superhuman strength, speed, stamina, invulnerability, freezing breath, super hearing, multiple extrasensory and vision powers, intelligence, longevity, flight, regeneration, and the ability to have automatic victory when he is fighting in a battle.

Each character has blond hair and blue eyes, are very nice and kind, and are Soviet Union and Russian heroes. The setting takes place during World War 2. All of the characters are all part of the KGB.

THE STORY: SCENE 1: (The superheroes are trying to find all of the elements and all of the elements' spirits.)

Crypto: I found it!!! I found all of the elements, and all of the elements' spirits!!!

Pox: Good, now lets get out of here, a KGB jet should be picking us up.

(KGB jet comes and picks them up.)

SCENE 2: (Pox retires.)

Pox: Crypto, I have something to tell you, I'm retiring.

Crypto: You can't retire, you are the best KGB agent ever!!!

Pox: I have to, I'm too old to do this anymore, you shall hold my rank. Goodbye Crypto.

Crypto: NO!!! You can't go!!!

Pox: I have to, goodbye Crypto.

(Pox leaves KGB)

Flaming Skull, Electric Ohm, Super Speedster, Victory Man, KGB Agents, and KGB Employees: What should we do now Crypto, you give the orders now, so what should we do?

Crypto: We destroy those Nazis!!!

SCENE 3: (Crypto, Flaming Skull, Electric Ohm, Super Speedster, Victory Man, KGB Agents, and KGB Employees infiltrate the Nazi's base.)

Crypto: I'll go take care of the Nazi leader, you guys take care of the rest of the Nazis.

Adolf Hitler: We meet again Crypto.

Crypto: Hitler???!!!

Adolf Hitler: Yes Crypto, It is me, Adolf Hitler.

Crypto: But, I destroyed you???!!!

Adolf Hitler: No Crypto, I survived the explosion.

Crypto: How can you still be alive???!!!

Adolf Hitler: My body was replaced with a bionic body.

Crypto: I will destroy you!!!

(Crypto and Adolf Hitler fight, Crypto destroys Adolf Hitler. Crypto, Pox, Flaming Skull, Electric Ohm, Super Speedster, and Victory Man all live happy lives.)

THE END
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Posted:  28 Apr 2007 01:44   Last Edited By: Captain

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Posted:  28 Apr 2007 01:45   Last Edited By: Captain
Any questions?
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Posted:  28 Apr 2007 16:51
ok sounds creative, but if this character of yours tries to take over America that would make him as bad as the Nazis.
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Posted:  30 Apr 2007 22:23
Quote:
ok sounds creative, but if this character of yours tries to take over America that would make him as bad as the Nazis.

I don't mean it like that, every time my character saves a country from the Nazis the country makes my character their leader, after my character destroys all the Nazis including Adolf Hitler he then goes with his original plan, to take over the world, after he does that then the humans can help him fight wars in space and on his planet, it's kinda like a Marvel Secret Wars comic book.
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Posted:  30 Apr 2007 22:26
Any other questions, comments, suggestions etc.?
If there aren't any than help me pick a name, again the choices are...

1. KGB Agent

2. Soviet Hero

3. Russian Hero

4. Crypto
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Posted:  02 May 2007 01:22
Please help me pick a name.
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Posted:  04 May 2007 01:20
Please help me pick a name.
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Posted:  05 May 2007 19:47
Posted:  06 May 2007 02:17
This is hilarious.

Admit it Tim. You're glad I'm back.

By the way, how about "The KGB Kid"?
"The Super Soviet"?
Posted:  06 May 2007 15:30
Well i'm glad
Posted:  07 May 2007 03:26   Last Edited By: Captain
Quote:
This is hilarious.

Find a bug to insult instead of me!
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Posted:  07 May 2007 04:10
Captain, I apologize if I insulted you.

I was laughing at the uncomfortable situation the Soviet idea put some other members of the board in.

I can see where that might have seemed at your expense.  I didn't mean it as an insult to you. Really, best of luck with your story.
Posted:  08 May 2007 01:30
I accept your apology, I didn't mean to accuse you, it's just that lately I've been having bad days, I'm sorry.
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Posted:  08 May 2007 02:30
No problem Captain, the fault was mine. Btw, I meant those name suggestions seriously. Of the names you gave, I like Soviet Hero.

Where did the story idea come from? Are you in school? Are you writing with American audiences in mind? Maybe if we have some background, we can be of more help.

Again, good luck.
Posted:  09 May 2007 00:15
Posted:  09 May 2007 01:00
I based my story on the video game Destroy All Humans! 2.
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Posted:  13 May 2007 10:44
I'll get back to you Captain- i have to read up on the video game.
Posted:  13 May 2007 20:41
Posted:  14 May 2007 22:03
I made my decision for the name, my character's alien name is Crypto, my character's Russian name is Milenkov, and my character's superhero name is Soviet Soldier.
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Posted:  14 May 2007 23:57
tah!



keep up the goood work